Don't Leave

feelings can be the worst thing about being a human at times

When I leave I really need to know

If you will be there for me

 

I need to know for my own perace of mind

I need to know or my world won't go round

 

I want to see you in my darkest hour

 

When i feel so bad

My life fails to pleas

 

If you won't tell me now

So i can start and move on

 

It might not be important to you

But when i think of you

 

My minde just goes mad

I can't think of anything els

Reviews

[AJ Kristiansen]

I like this Becca a lot... it's beautiful and I like the message. You create a poignant description of (yes) the struggles of being human and dealing with emotions. You just need to take care with your spelling (unless it's intentional?) Keep up the good work, nice write! :)