Invisible

I hate being bummed out :( I probably shouldn't write poems when I am....

Invisible
Unnatural
No one knows I'm
Multilateral
Not here I'm really
Fictional
Unfixable
Invisible

Author's Note

Sorry for posting such a stupid poem :P But I can't throw my writing away for at least ten years no matter how sucky I think it is. Bear with me :)

Reviews

[Frieda P]

ha, your author's note is almost as good as the poetry. What happens after ten years, is there a place rejected poetry goes? Like lonely hearts club for mediocre writes....It's not Poe but it says a helluva lot in those few words, that's what poetry is supposed to do. I like it.

[Becca Bishop]

No, nothing so awesome as that :P I had this teacher in my sophmore year that told us that we could throw any of our writing away, no matter how bad we thought it was, for at least ten years because if we did she'd hunt us down and shove the stuff we threw away down our throats in an effort to show us how wrong we were to throw it away in the first place. Needless to say the threat scared me :D :D So now after ten years it's going to go in the magical...trashcan ;P

It's definitely not Poe but thanks for liking it anyway :P :D :D :D

[Frieda P]

I have to agree with her, it's still a part of you, you birthed it, some kids are just funnier looking than others! :D

[Frieda P]

Gawd, I hope I didn't mess your day up kiddo! :P

[Becca Bishop]

Mwahahahahahah!!! No you didn't ruin my day :P In fact, I think you just made it tons better :D :D :P

[Frieda P]

Ha, well I read your status earlier...!!! :D

[Becca Bishop]

:P oh, I see. Nah, none of my writer's cafe peeps (hehe :P I sound all hip and young) could ever make my day bad. I think....nah, I'm pretty sure they couldn't....

[rmae]

there's something beautiful in this poem.

[Becca Bishop]

:) Thank you!

[Saichiro Wolftotem]

I don't think this is bad at all, actually. A little short, but that would be my only complaint. We should collaborate on a piece or something. Maybe that would cheer you up.

[Becca Bishop]

It's short cause I ran out of rhyming words :P
I'd love to work on a piece with you!!! Are you thinking poetry or story? Or were you just saying that cause you knew it'd distract me? :D

[Saichiro Wolftotem]

Poems are usually what I fill my writer's block in with. I was thinking more of a story and stuff. And no, I was not 'just saying that', crazyface. You're a good writer and I'd genuinely like to work together with someone.

[Becca Bishop]

YOU JUST MADE ME SOOOOOO HAPPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D It's always been my really weird dream to co-write something with someone!!! I'm gonna go make cookies now!!!!!!

[Saichiro Wolftotem]

Yikes!! Down girl. lol Can I have a cookie?

[Becca Bishop]

Are you serious!!! *Bursts into laughter* BWAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAHahahahahahahahah ahahahahahahahaha hahahahahah hahahah hahah hah ha ha eh *cough cough* Oh you silly girl!!! You think my mom trusts me to use the stove while I'm home alone??? You are much mistaken ;P

[Saichiro Wolftotem]

O_O Your caffeine level...it's...OVER 9000!!!!

[Becca Bishop]

OH MY GOSH I NEED TO SLOW DOWN ON THE CHOCOLATE!!!!! WEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!