Sun's Down

Sun's Down

A Poem by Shannen Teopiz

Lay aside the problems

Get rid of that frown

Time to rest the body

Now that the sun’s down

 

Stars now begin to appear

On the night sky of the town

Cool breeze now starts to stir

Because the sun’s down

 

Be loving and forgiving

Be as happy as a clown

Sleep well to prepare for the morning

And know that the sun’s down

 

Sun’s down

It’s down at last

Sleep in God’s embrace

Thank His goodness and His grace.

© 2015 Shannen Teopiz


Author's Note

Shannen Teopiz
God gave us time to rest , let's thank Him , He's the best.

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Hi, This is a nice poem, your rhymes flow nicely and naturally. I love the spiritual element!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Shannen Teopiz

9 Years Ago

Thanks for the review. I appreciate it.

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Shannen Teopiz
Shannen Teopiz

Cebu, 7, Philippines



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Hi. I am a poetry enthusiast. I hope you like my poem because i do think it's my only possession that's worth liking for. LONG LIVE POETRY! more..

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A Poem by Shannen Teopiz