Please Do Hurry!

About pain and moving on.

Gave him my all

Gave him my best

Now I can’t stand tall

For I am in a test

 

He gave me a reason to be happy

A reason more than I’d ever sought

That’s why he meant the world to me

For I loved him a lot

 

The faster the love in my heart started to bloom

The slower I’m dying because of gloom

With him, I did feel safe and sound

But I realized I was just a rebound

 

I’m so hurt, I really am

Knowing that I have to smile using a sham

But I can no longer be a pretender

For I can’t pretend forever

 

Together with my process of moving on

I also need a reliable person

Of course to move on is very hard to do

If you don’t have someone to help you

 

To even attempt to be like him, I would never

For I don’t want anyone to suffer

And also, I’m not looking for someone

Just for me to have fun

 

Maybe he’s just around me

The one who can really make me happy

So whoever you may be

Please do hurry!

Author's Note

Hope you like it. :)

Reviews

[Willard Wells]

Please darken the fonts. i would love to read it, but it is just a bit to light. Thanks. Send me a read request if and when you make that chance.

[Shannen Teopiz]

Thanks for the suggestion. I've already darkened it now. :)

[Willard Wells]

I am not the grammar of structure police. Which does not mean you need any, just information. It flowed very nicely until the last three stanzas and then it seem to loss the flow. I expect a little word adjustment could fix it. But unless you see it wait for more reviews. One mans view is not enough to base changes on unless you see it also. Thanks for sharing. And darkening the font.

[Shannen Teopiz]

You're welcome and thanks also for the helpful comment. :)