I saw the sun today

I saw the sun today

A Poem by beauitifulybroken

 I saw the sun today

when i arose from my bed

and peered out the window

the sky didn’t look so gray

i didn’t seem to realize how muted the colors had become

until the beautiful rays of color hit me

with the warm heat of the sun

i had been accompanied by a rain cloud

soaking me through to the bone

with tears shed on my cheeks

but now as i sit and cry, reveling in my quiet joy

i see the bright colors of purple, pink and orange

the sun rises from the horizon

I didn’t seem to notice how weighed down i had become

my life was void of color

with shades of black and grey

the little rain cloud has seemed to disappear for now

although i know some days it will  return

but in the end I know I’ll be okay

because i saw the sun today



 

                          

© 2024 beauitifulybroken


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Beautiful work with splendid imagery.

Posted 11 Months Ago


Bursting with imagery, great word choices.
Calls to mind someone's daily struggle with depression, and their hopeful moments for sunnier days.

Posted 11 Months Ago


beauitifulybroken

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad that it resonated with you.
Anita Frader

11 Months Ago

You're welcome 😊

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beauitifulybroken
beauitifulybroken

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Inside there is a soul that is yearning to be heard,felt and seen. Letting my self express these thoughts and words help for that soul to feel a little less alone. more..

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