Weight

Weight

A Poem by beauitifulybroken
"

When the weight of the world is upon your shoulders

"

I’m beginning to realize

The weight I've allowed 

Of other’s opinions

They hold me in a vice grip

Constricting my lungs

Making it hard to breathe


I find myself terrified to think

 Of who I could be

If i took the weight off my shoulders


The fear is like a cement block

 holding me down

I’m scared if i jump

The weight will sink me

I’ll drown


It’s hard to convey the meaning

What stops me from believing

I could be anything but ordinary


Do these words even make sense?

Or am i spouting gibberish?

Can you hold it in your hands 

Like an old photograph of a friend

Or does it disintegrate like ashes

through your fingertips

© 2023 beauitifulybroken


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Remarkably clear voice.
Comforting tones that
honestly stirs this
reader of writers
empathy.

"It’s hard to convey the meaning
What stops me from believing
I could be anything but ordinary"

Perhaps you have....

R.



Posted 1 Year Ago


This is so relatable for me, makes me feel like im not alone

Posted 1 Year Ago



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Added on October 29, 2023
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beauitifulybroken
beauitifulybroken

Canada



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Inside there is a soul that is yearning to be heard,felt and seen. Letting my self express these thoughts and words help for that soul to feel a little less alone. more..

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