Adaptation

Wrapped in seaweed
Gasps escape
Life unfolds
As I lie in the wake

Portals agape
Signs of condensation
Touch of your hand
Release of exhilaration

Again and again
I need more
I need u to feel
That it is you and I that I live for.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful and strong words. No weakness in the poem. I had to read a few times to enjoy the power and strength of the poem. When we are happy and found someone to set our life a fire. No better day. A excellent ending to a very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote