Today

Falling fast, spinning round
Sharp daggers ignite on the ground

Tears of agony, taste of defeat
Wallowing as I lay at your feet

Soaking wet, sobs of sunder
Deaf ears listen for detonation of thunder

Eyes agape, introduction of light
Quiescent quiver deteriorates into the night

Reviews

[Unruly]

The emotion here is wonderful.

[Coyote Poetry]

Wow. Poem is powerful. The pain, the falling and the defeat are very strong in the words. I like the language. This is a poem I must read a few times. A outstanding poem.
Coyote