life

Caverns of green growing in front of my eyes

Closing in on my mind

Strangling my thoughts and sucking my energy dry

My bones bleed life which drains from my pores

Dying to escape

To be alive

To live in harmony with the fiery gas

Which illuminates the darkness of the sky

Reviews

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. ah, some amazing instances of alliteration here ... striking images ... brilliant narrative ... the contrasting word choices make the world you create immensely expressive ...

[Candylove.]

brilliant; ironically enough...this is stylized and written in a way that i could call my own? If that makes sense? haha Your use of words has ...electricity behind them making the emotions hit harder. Well done! :)