Between You and Me

Between you and me

Colorful butterflies adrift at sea

Carry Memories that have once been lost

Freezing in time beneath the midnight frost

Between you and me

And the drops of liquid in our tea

Beyond our image we connect and through our senses we project

our inner feelings without a word

without a single sound to be heard

Reviews

[Kristopher]

Ethereal in beauty, your words flow like music from an angels lips. :)

The line "Beyond our image we connect and through our senses we project" feels as if it should be two lines like:
Beyond our image we connect
and through our senses we project

Also, then you could take out "and"

[Moonflower]

This was lovely and almost mysterious. A very enjoyable read, sir.

[I Am Svetlana]

I love the imagery in this: the butterflies, the tea and the emotion is beautifully expressed. Great job!

[Candylove.]

Hmm, you have something pretty wonderful here. It's a bit short, but still a great piece! :)

Beyond our image we connect and through our senses we project
our inner feelings without a word
without a single sound to be heard

Loved those lines. Keep up the good work!