shambles

shambles

A Poem by beatles1189

My life sits in shambles
Broken pieces beneath my feet
I stop to smell the flowers
Who introduce themselves to me
Try to see through your window
But emptiness is all I see
I've been running for hours
Yet i still can't fall asleep

© 2010 beatles1189


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it's like a frustrating search for nothing.

"I stop to smell the flowers
Who introduce themselves to me" a simple surreal couple of lines.



Posted 14 Years Ago


Enjoyed this short piece. The words really flowed well together. Love the last two lines.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on August 16, 2010
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A Poem by beatles1189