to too

 

...

...too many words

and too many syllables of course

and too many

beat beat beats

to count

 

too many

obstacles

to

call it random

 

call it random

 

life

 

Reviews

[R J Askew]

I can hear this fragment very strongly. I can hear a metronome (sp?) beating it out in the background, too. Yes, there are definitely too many words. Maybe that is the hidden point of this short verse. It makes its point swiftly and is done. So too life is all too soon done.