i dent ti tee

con nect wit meee
ur tear eyed blue ride n
smiles

a dart here and there

with a stich

and a hue

hem

of green and blue
too sur pri ze me too soon
wit ur good bye li ne ed lace
lookin
up 2 c ur clouds busting

in the

re ign ing light

   of mel an col ee
for mee 
2 be u
would take a mill lion years of chill un
and
  a

zap of light
from the sun
lamp
called
li fffff e

re flec ting

in a metal

palate

of hue mmm

 man

i tea

and

why

woood

i

want to b be u -

- ti fullll

anyway?

jus

smi

mile

an

b

me

Reviews

[Cicera]

I'm smiling. I don't know, did you have any other particular purpose here? For this is, first of all, fine linguistic clowning. One of the reasons I like Shakespeare so much is this very same carefree and intelligent play with words, sounds and twisted meanings. But now I see the title I realise that this fragmentation might as well be made on purpose. This is good purposeful writing that employs a creative use of language.