Hanging (flash fic.)

A fun little story...

Flash fiction   Hanging                                                                              Brooklyn McPherson

 

He sits in a dark room. Actually he’s more like hanging in a dark room. He sways side to side and spins slowly in a circle over a large cadge. A hand reaches for him but its falls short as he circles away from the hand. A bright light flicks on and a mother comes and removes the child from the crib. The fluffy bear watches, from his little mobile.

Reviews

[Bethany_Savy]

I love the plot twist that you put in here. It seemed as if it was something hanging and someone had died but instead it was just the opposite. It represents the start of life. Good job Brooklyn :)

[Brooklyn Mcpherson]

i don't know why but i find this funny :)