The Passion Is Gone

The Passion Is Gone

A Poem by Bear
"

memories of a love long gone yet, remembered to this day....

"

 

 

You are still within me...

      always a part of me...

           but~~

the passion is gone.

      I love you

      would do most anything for you,

           but~~

the passion is gone.

      It bothers me that I

      can't intellectually, philosophically

             communicate with you...

                 there's just to much static

                     on our line...

        I'd like to be able to do what you

            want,

but, if it doesn't feel right... what can I do?

     I can't wing my feelings if it

          doesn't feel right. 

 

© 2008 Bear


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KURRUPTED-(nodding)-" very relative, and very true...been there for 8 years and in a blink of an eye it all crashed down like the world trade center; the most hurting aspect is that "why?" i still dont know, but the whole world knows that the feelings in me are'nt still flaring but they keep burning more and more"

one of the remarkable feature about sallie bear's writings i observed is the very tendency of infusing the reader into its lines....we dont read it we are it, her poems are us, the lines are our life but scripted. awesomely sad.

Posted 15 Years Ago


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I like the way you draw me into your poems. This is a good description of how it feels when the "passion is gone".

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So honest..when the passion it's gone.. the end is real.. I like the flow and the words.. every verse ... can I have it? lol
xoxox

Posted 14 Years Ago


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I feel the same. Nothing feels right with the one I care about and I don't see things working out like I had hoped. Would you look at my work?

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice!!! There is no truer feeling then what you brought forth. Love may still remain, but not what others wish it to be.. Passion, to me, so very important in all I believe, when that's gone, nothing can force it back..

Great write here!

Mags xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KURRUPTED-(nodding)-" very relative, and very true...been there for 8 years and in a blink of an eye it all crashed down like the world trade center; the most hurting aspect is that "why?" i still dont know, but the whole world knows that the feelings in me are'nt still flaring but they keep burning more and more"

one of the remarkable feature about sallie bear's writings i observed is the very tendency of infusing the reader into its lines....we dont read it we are it, her poems are us, the lines are our life but scripted. awesomely sad.

Posted 15 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Oh, I love this one. It is hurts when you love someone with genuine care and the passion is gone. It is so sad and you have captured it in this gem. Extraordinary write!!!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Such a truthful, heartfelt write. I have felt exactly this way before. Well penned, my friend. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So many time we recycle poeple in our lives. It sounds like you took a stance. I need that courage and desire. This is such a wonderful poem. To translate your current existence and showcase such imagery is a tribute to your talents. Thanks for creating and sharing. I have to go read your other pieces.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I can feel this poem. I can relate so well. Love isn't alays strong enough to keep the realtionship going.

Nicely written, flow is smooth.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow, SO deep. I felt this write. I know I have felt this in my life as do many. Great write. Never lose your passion in life. ~Ev

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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