The Passion Is Gone

memories of a love long gone yet, remembered to this day....

 

 

You are still within me...

      always a part of me...

           but~~

the passion is gone.

      I love you

      would do most anything for you,

           but~~

the passion is gone.

      It bothers me that I

      can't intellectually, philosophically

             communicate with you...

                 there's just to much static

                     on our line...

        I'd like to be able to do what you

            want,

but, if it doesn't feel right... what can I do?

     I can't wing my feelings if it

          doesn't feel right. 

 

Reviews

[kurrupted]

KURRUPTED-(nodding)-" very relative, and very true...been there for 8 years and in a blink of an eye it all crashed down like the world trade center; the most hurting aspect is that "why?" i still dont know, but the whole world knows that the feelings in me are'nt still flaring but they keep burning more and more"

one of the remarkable feature about sallie bear's writings i observed is the very tendency of infusing the reader into its lines....we dont read it we are it, her poems are us, the lines are our life but scripted. awesomely sad.

[Desert Dreamer]

I like the way you draw me into your poems. This is a good description of how it feels when the "passion is gone".

[MagiCrystal]

So honest..when the passion it's gone.. the end is real.. I like the flow and the words.. every verse ... can I have it? lol
xoxox

[Joe]

I feel the same. Nothing feels right with the one I care about and I don't see things working out like I had hoped. Would you look at my work?

[Magdelena]

Nice!!! There is no truer feeling then what you brought forth. Love may still remain, but not what others wish it to be.. Passion, to me, so very important in all I believe, when that's gone, nothing can force it back..

Great write here!

Mags xx

[Ladysue]

Oh, I love this one. It is hurts when you love someone with genuine care and the passion is gone. It is so sad and you have captured it in this gem. Extraordinary write!!!

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Such a truthful, heartfelt write. I have felt exactly this way before. Well penned, my friend. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[THE LOST ROSE]

So many time we recycle poeple in our lives. It sounds like you took a stance. I need that courage and desire. This is such a wonderful poem. To translate your current existence and showcase such imagery is a tribute to your talents. Thanks for creating and sharing. I have to go read your other pieces.

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

I can feel this poem. I can relate so well. Love isn't alays strong enough to keep the realtionship going.

Nicely written, flow is smooth.

[Everett DeValle]

Wow, SO deep. I felt this write. I know I have felt this in my life as do many. Great write. Never lose your passion in life. ~Ev