Life?

oh just what came to mind after reading of the 10 word poetry contest...

Life

might

be

easier

if

one

didn't

think

so

much.

Author's Note

didn't say it was good, just what came to mind.

Reviews

[Nautili]

I like it, straight to the point and so true! Sometimes the concise one are the most powerful because they get right to the point! it isn't saying to become a drone and not to think, but not to over-analyze everything-which I have been accused of doing by my husband more than once!!!! probably it will speak mostly to those who have that problem.....who cannot sleep at night because there mind is in overdrive.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

short and straight to the point .... i like it

[Coyote Poetry]

Few words but they are true words. We over think life and the simple tasks in our life. A nice 10 words.
Coyote

[Angel Baby]

It is good and makes perfect sense to me, just wish I would of thought of it years ago. Might not have as many gray hairs as I do now worrying about things I shouldn't of been worrying about. LOL I love this ten words think I keep them in this old mind of mine from here on out. P.W.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Oh, yes how very true. Sometimes I wish I could just turn the ole thinker off for a good while. Very nice!

[~angelalala~]

oh but it would be so much easier. this sentence speaks volumes. beautifully simple write.

[Pink Poison]

This is an excellent little poem. It captures an essential truth of life that most of don't learn until far too late.

[Michael X]

I like it, it makes perfect sense in insight
and has a drift of knowledge, being a ten word contest,
I loved the idea, crafty.

[midsummer]

You said it, sister.

I like the simplicity of this piece. Sometimes we use many more words than we should. Great restraint.

Midsummer

[Lena M. P.]

Made me smile. My husbands favorite line is, "That's the problem, you were thinking again."