It's to bad...

It's to bad...

A Poem by Bear
"

oh, just wishing, knowing it'll never be...

"

It's to bad, 

           you can't be more

                                that what you are

                        to me.....

I dream and wish for more,

                          ~~ more than what we are;

                   more than what I feel I am.

       If all the wishes came true....

  the possibility is there

             that we would not be

      at all...

   the past would fade... or be entirely changed...

         so, I guess it comes down to me

                              settling for what is ~~~

              and being grateful that "we" are

                                            at all.

 

                                

© 2008 Bear


Author's Note

 Bear
oh, don't worry... the friendship continues...

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Yanno, many times we're told to never settle but when you think about it, life is about compromise and making do. I used to say I'd never settle but now I know that the love/friendship that is given to us very well could be all that person has to give. When you look at it that way, we aren't settling at all. :+)

A great write, I enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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I like how you use space in this piece, leaving space blank like missing pieces. Well written.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Sounds like a longing for more than friendship - wonderfully expressed in so few words. Thank you for sharing such depth of emotion. I pray this finds you well.
Love and Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Awww that was beautifull!! i can so relate to this! and to this day some 21 years later I am so glade that we are still close friends.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

It must be a good friend. Cherish that. This is a beautiful write.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Yanno, many times we're told to never settle but when you think about it, life is about compromise and making do. I used to say I'd never settle but now I know that the love/friendship that is given to us very well could be all that person has to give. When you look at it that way, we aren't settling at all. :+)

A great write, I enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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