Unexpected Thunderstorm of Friendship

the one no one considered inviting into the "inner circle" was the one that glistened, most of all, and inspired this "trio" of thoughts from within me.....

 

 

                 You're my unexpected thunderstorm

                       appearing out of nowhere

                             cleansing me

                         and bringing beauty.

            ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

                    You were a free flying bird

                                        way out on my horizon.

                             The ocean was a lonely place for me

        to push you to;

                    but, with your strength ~~

             toward land, you kept flying.

                    You are now an enexpected thunderstorm

                         from that horizon, you approach

                                 from out of nowhere ~~ you barrel in

                             and stir things up.

                     With that excitement

              you cleanse me,

      and into my being --- bring beauty.

           ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 

                You are as beautiful as your representative star...

           just out of reach,

                                    as you will always be to me.

                          Yet, always there

       for me to watch,

                          be with,

                                     admire.

 

                              

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Zounds like maybe a bit of a love poem to me Bear. Burried in there behind that 'friendship' word.

[An Ordinary Woman]

Wow this is really lovely, Bear. My first thought was that one never really knows, my own dreams seemingly taking shape when I never thought they would. Your poem holds a certain beauty, it is made special with love and longing.

Excellent writing my friend.

[Jazlean]

I love this. The three parts worked well, distinct but together at the same time, life friendship itself.
While I know it is not indended to be lyrics I soon found myself singing the words softly, the kind of song you can sit and sing to yourself as you gaze out at the sky.
friends do indeed bring beauty to our lives, and this is a beautiful peom my friend.
another fantastic write, well done.
~Jaz

[Nely Amorim]

a very beautiful ode to friendship indeed.. lovely pace and flows so well. thanks for sharing :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

This is such a stunning ode to friendship. The best kind for certain so much better than those so called fair-weathered friends. Just beautiful. Thank you for penning such delight.
Light,
Siddartha