the perfect review

these kind of people
make poetry not

they use words of sixteen syllables
to tell the reader
what to think
imagine
feel

their perspectives
derived from oxford shoes
and bi-focal lenses
perched at the end of
higher educated noses

when a violet is blue
they give
irony and paradoxes
to fill their quest
for the perfect review

this is
their poetry
searching a way
to say
i am creative
too

Reviews

[trinaspen]

Oooh! I like this one! LOL...very clever, BC! that last stanza rocked, s**t! (love the bio!)

[Lyrical Love]

This is soooo true and the whimsical nature that you
use to speak
this was very clever!

[.]

Should i review? lol

That was so true, and funny

Great write, i loved these lines:

"when a violet is blue
they give
irony and paradoxes
to fill their quest
for the perfect review"