recollection

getting the groove back

she slept on my shoulder
and i dreamed with her

the rise and fall of her breast
set the cadence of our move toward together
apart from trust
away from loving
tender
we recoiled our speak

i look upon her
i see what was seen
flesh and soul
and fingers with mine
i remembered
i love her

Reviews

[Alice Oiseau]

Sweet with a gentle tune to accompany the romantic setting and mood.
I love the lines "and I dreamed with her"
For me, it creates this beautiful image of two souls becoming one by uniting through dreams. It's a cool way of looking at it, as well as very poetic and beautiful.
I liked.
Cheers.