soft touch

the welcome of spring and sweet love

in
the same
skillful way satin
serenades smooth silky skin . .
the soft touch of spring
is stimulating and seducing my senses
- the scene is serene, simple and satisfying -

in
the same
sweet symbolic way,
i’m longing to
savor the soft
touch of
you

 
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- because the ache is strong -

Author's Note

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Art by- Richard Johnson

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

Love the way you intertwine the softness and seduction of spring withe that if the human body, makes it very interesting
Thank you for sharing you vivid words
Warmly
B🌷

[Richard🖌]

Brilliantly beautiful, Brandy 🌸

There's one unavoidable aspect of your Freestyle compositions no poetical connoisseur will be able to decry: there's not a scintilla of ambiguity to be found … every nuance, metaphor, hint, enthralling bit of imagery is spot-on crystal clear and powerfully impactful to a fault. No one with an ounce of genuine warmth, feeling, or spirituality could fail to be fully pulled into and held by the alluring visions of each moment.
From art choice and title, to display and layout, poetic voice and timbre, I find your work to be original, captivating, and simply a joy to venture through.

The sibilance of V1 is sheer grammatical brilliance, while V2 and closing line virtually dances to its own sabled sssoftnesss.

Gorgeousss artwork and title, Poetess … what a sssweet treat! ⁓ Richard🖌

[Brandy]

Richard, your kindness doesn't go unnoticed.

Yes, there's ' genuine warmth ' within. Beyond that, the gentle touch of spring lingers . . .

However, it's so much more than a warm welcome to that beautiful season, there's a longing to be close - in such an intimate way.

Your thoughts bring a smile. : )

Thank you for saying this is a ' sweet treat. '

[Richard🖌]

Yes, a longing shared … you are most welcome, Brandy✨

[Ash]

its beautifull I hope you can read my book its amazing

[Brandy]

I appreciate your kind review. Thank you, Ash.

[Lorry]

Smooth, with a capital SMOO! 😃

[Brandy]

Now that's a compliment. :) Thank you, Lorry.

[Dave W.]

Brandy this is really good, I love imagery you paint, also welcome back.

[Brandy]

Your thoughts are appreciated, Dave. I enjoy painting with my words. Thank you for the welcome back, my dear friend. :)

[Trace]

This is a beautiful poem that relates convincingly how people feel towards each other and the desire is real.

Nicely penned.

T.

[Brandy]

Love is in the air, this time of year, and spring is beautiful; indeed. Longing to be close, to embrace the one you love. That connection is evident within.

:) Thank you, Trace.