Elevated Escape

** Love is . . reaching for you- beyond words, beyond the sky **

beating in rhythm with the sea, like how your words move wild and free,

                                 breaths are elevated -
            as this escape holds you,
                   - so much deeper into me
          ( yes, i could fall into you )
                        into your love

my heart- it begins to race, simply imagining your lips with grace,
                             softly and ever so lightly -
                          in those sweet ever after kisses
                lingering upon delicate moments, of my face

                              
in a poetic whisper- like the melody of the wind, i am captivated again,
                beyond your song, the beauty of where i belong -
                    as the symphony of this, holds me in bliss

                                       i need to stay
                                         i long to be

                                    - your poetry -

                                 breaths are elevated
            as this escape holds you,
                   - so much deeper into me
          ( yes, i could fall into you )
                        into your love
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Author's Note

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~ A passionate/romantic scribble ~

Reviews

[Amy R]

Very passion filled poem.
Loved it very much. It explores the deep emotional connection between two individuals, emphasizing the beauty and intimacy of their relationship.
Loved language choice, you used plenty phrases that made it more lyrical and also emotional.

-Amy

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful sensual moments written. Good poem as a song I feel.

[robert harris jr]

baring all is a beautiful expression words that continue on forever captures time /love you is infinity!

[Brandy]

Dear Robert, your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. ' baring all, ' is a beautiful way to express the mood within.

Your kind words are appreciated.

[Lorry]

Excellently capturing the moment where two become one, forever entangled in more than the mere thoughts of that moment.
A happy place to be indeed.

[Brandy]

While this poem reflects soft, sensual passion. It's also about falling in love. Both are breathtaking moments to embrace. Thank you Lorry, for your kind review. Your thoughts are appreciated.

[Starr]

A very beautiful and sensual write here. nicely written

[Brandy]

Soft, sensual moments linger within. Thank you so much Starr, for your kind review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This is interesting and sensual....interesting because it is like making love two times in one..not only in a physical sense but also a mental and emotional sense by falling into one's poetry and going deeper
as well as the physical consumation of bodies coming together...this is what is called making love...when it is much deeper than just physical.
Beautiful piece and I really like the in-line rhyme.
j.

[Brandy]

Dear Jacob, your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Being in love is a wonderful feeling.

This poem is about that connection. Every exciting emotion of the heart, along with those sensual and satisfying sensations.

So happy you like the in-line rhyme. Thank you for your kind review.

:) Brandy

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful and passionate.

[Brandy]

Passion does linger within. Your thoughts are appreciated, Thomas.

[Trace]

This is such a beautiful love poem for that special person that hold your heart.
Very nicely penned.

Trace

[Brandy]

Thank you Trace, for your kind review. When love curls around you, it's magical and beautiful, all at the same time. I'm embracing these moments within.

My heart is smiling and I'm floating. :)