Elevated Escape - sizzling and satisfying

** Love is . . reaching for you- beyond words, beyond the sky **

beating in rhythm with the sea, like how your words move wild and free,

                                 breaths are elevated -
            as this escape holds you,
                   - so much deeper into me
          ( yes, i could fall into you )
                        into your love

my heart- it begins to race, simply imagining your lips with grace,
                             softly and ever so lightly -
                          in those sweet ever after kisses
                lingering upon delicate moments, of my face

                              
in a poetic whisper- like the melody of the wind, i am captivated again,
                beyond your song, the beauty of where i belong -
                    as the symphony of this, holds me in bliss

                                       i need to stay
                                         i long to be

                                    - your poetry -

                                 breaths are elevated
            as this escape holds you,
                   - so much deeper into me
          ( yes, i could fall into you )
                        into your love
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Author's Note

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~ A passionate/romantic scribble ~

Reviews

[Dave W.]

Brandy!!!!!! this was so passionate and lovingly penned, it was a joy to read and just great, Thankyou for sharing

[Brandy]

Thank you, Dave. Your kind words bring a smile. :) Many wonderful blessings to you.

[Dave W.]

May Spring blessings visit you and your loved ones

[Richard🖌]

Hm? I THOUGHT I smelled smoke.🔥

Now, Brandy,
This is a perfect example of the Freestyle form, with its well-placed, intermittent rhymes threaded amongst unmetered lines, spot-on linebreaks, gorgeously rendered poetic voice, metaphor, and imagery, with emotional fantasies sweeping fervently through one's senses silky smoothly, too.
I don't think there's a jealous button left unpushed or a passionate notion unthought, and I'm positive the following penultimate lines (et al) just energized my every manly fiber!😳

"as the symphony of this, holds me in bliss
i need to stay
i long to be
- your poetry -
breaths are elevated
as this escape holds you,
- so much deeper into me"

Excuse me, please, Ma'am, while I pry open a window....sheesh!
A romantic, virtually erotic, sensually imbued masterpiece with luring artwork and an artist's presentation:
what's not to love? ⁓ Richard 🌺🐝

[Brandy]

Dear Richard, this small section you are sharing seems to have taken your breath away. It is an exciting and inviting moment.

My heart is fluttering with your thoughts.

This poem is about falling in love, but it also holds so many satisfying sensations within.

Yes, it is getting warm in here. Blushing.

Your kind review brings a smile. : )

[Ash]

OMG I LOVE IT SOO MUCH I hope you are able to read my book its a romance

[Brandy]

Thank you Ash, for your kind review.

[Amy R]

Very passion filled poem.
Loved it very much. It explores the deep emotional connection between two individuals, emphasizing the beauty and intimacy of their relationship.
Loved language choice, you used plenty phrases that made it more lyrical and also emotional.

-Amy

[Brandy]

Dear Amy, your comment is beautiful beyond words. You're able to feel the emotions within and the connection between lovers. It's truly magical.

Moments are filled with love and intimacy.

So kind of you to mention the language choice and poetic phrases. Yes, it is somewhat lyrical.

Thank you for your lovely review. :)

[Amy R]

Very true, you're welcome...

[Arundass TP]

Beautiful sensual moments written. Good poem as a song I feel.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Arundass. This does feel lyrical, beyond being soft, sensual and poetic. Your kind review is appreciated. :)

[robert harris jr]

baring all is a beautiful expression words that continue on forever captures time /love you is infinity!

[Brandy]

Dear Robert, your thoughts caress the page with elegance and grace. ' baring all, ' is a beautiful way to express the mood within.

Your kind words are appreciated.

[Lorry]

Excellently capturing the moment where two become one, forever entangled in more than the mere thoughts of that moment.
A happy place to be indeed.

[Brandy]

While this poem reflects soft, sensual passion. It's also about falling in love. Both are breathtaking moments to embrace. Thank you Lorry, for your kind review. Your thoughts are appreciated.

[Starr]

A very beautiful and sensual write here. nicely written

[Brandy]

Soft, sensual moments linger within. Thank you so much Starr, for your kind review.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

This is interesting and sensual....interesting because it is like making love two times in one..not only in a physical sense but also a mental and emotional sense by falling into one's poetry and going deeper
as well as the physical consumation of bodies coming together...this is what is called making love...when it is much deeper than just physical.
Beautiful piece and I really like the in-line rhyme.
j.

[Brandy]

Dear Jacob, your thoughts leave me in complete awe. Being in love is a wonderful feeling.

This poem is about that connection. Every exciting emotion of the heart, along with those sensual and satisfying sensations.

So happy you like the in-line rhyme. Thank you for your kind review.

:) Brandy

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful and passionate.

[Brandy]

Passion does linger within. Your thoughts are appreciated, Thomas.