words whisper

~ emotions emerge ~

     

- dimensions divide,

distracting with distance

 

 

. . until words whisper

 

 

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* and that's enough,*

to feel you

 

 

~*~

Author's Note

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longing and lingering

Reviews

[poetgurl]

Hi Brandy, I really enjoyed this write, very nicely written and said.
A very well impacted write in such a few short words.

[Brandy]

So kind of you to say, poetgurl. I appreciate you reading this little scribble of mine.

[Twilight]

So short, but not immediately obvious in terms of what this piece is seeking to express.

Despite my being a guy, I reckon that I can just about grasp the emotional angle to this.

Basically, it would apply to lovers who are already close; and known one another for quite a while.

In such a scenario, the mere "whisper" of words may well be enough; to "feel you". Indeed, particular if such words are uttered; in the way of so called "sweet nothings". Or, possibly involving some special words; of unique meaning to the lovers.?

Thanks for sharing.

[Brandy]

Twilight, you've broken down all the possibilities within. Thank you for that. I appreciate you diving so deeply into my words.
* * the mere "whisper" of words may well be enough; to "feel you" ** This is exactly what I'm saying. It truly is enough. A beautiful connection, indeed.

Thank you once again, for your lovely review.

[Twilight]

Thanks, Brandy. Enjoy what remains of your Saturday too.

[Lorry]

Superbly stated in this short but impactful piece.
If you're ever in any doubt to words whisperings effectiveness, just start a conversation by telling people you have a sore throat and see how attentive they listen as you whisper. It's almost like a hidden easter egg of life that works far better than shouting at the top of your lungs, which only makes more people notice how overly loud you are being.
Plus, there is nothing like the comfort of a cozy chat with someone, no matter how far away they are.

[Brandy]

Well said, Lorry ! Whispering is wonderful in many ways. Beyond sharing simple thoughts, to creating a beautiful moment with someone special. A soft voice is welcomed, indeed. You and your thoughts are greatly appreciated.

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

'words whisper' is such an inventive and evocative way of expressing intimacy. it brings up an image that implies so much. this was powerful poetry, and the alliteration in the first stanza really hold this up.

[Brandy]

You're right, Ern. Those soft whispers create a beautiful mood, indeed. Thank you for sharing your thoughts about the first stanza. I'm enjoying using alliteration in poetry.

[Trace]

Whispers can be heard often louder than a scream.

Nicely penned.

Trace

[Brandy]

Yes, I completely agree. There's something magical about those soft whispers. Thank you, Trace. Your kindness is appreciated.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful. Powerful work.

[Brandy]

So kind of you to say. Thank you, Thomas !

[Arundass TP]

Excellent powerful lines. Loved it and thinking about it. Nicely written

[Brandy]

Thank you, Arundass. So kind of you to read this little scribble of mine.

[Kelly Scheppers]

Hey girl, what a surprise to find you here! I really like this, brevity speaks volumes to me. I don't think you need that "but" at the beginning. It reads better without it. Beautiful photo brings it all into focus!

[Brandy]

I'm a little surprised, myself. Thank you Kelly, for the suggestion and for your kind review. I agree, sometimes less is so much more. I appreciate you sharing your thoughts about the photo as well. :) Brandy