absolutely needed

* longing to collide *

wishing to willfully escape -

                       to tangle and then twist
                                  like the melody of the wind,

                           an ache to perfectly entwine

                     with depth, simply molding us
                            - into so much more  

                           my heartbeat quickens

                        because it is -
                                     absolutely needed

                                        ___________

Author's Note

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a romantic scribble

Reviews

[Trace]

This sounds like the beginning of a relationship that is meant to be, or one that can't be helped.

Nicely done.

Trace

[Brandy]

Aching to entwine . .
to become so much more.

It would be a relationship that's meant to be.
To feel connected in such a beautiful, romantic and passionate way.

Thank you Trace, for your kind words.

[Trace]

Passionately connecting is so impoto a relationship, along with the physical.
T.

[Brandy]

Yes, through physical touch a connection is made, which also creates a passionate connection. It's beautiful.

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. Great use of the senses.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Thomas. : )
Many wonderful blessings to you.

[Amy R]

Very sweet write, definitely flowing like the wind, and simple yet meaningful.
Thanks for sharing. -Amy

[Brandy]

The wind is very inviting. Moments are simple, yet sensual and serene, all at the same time. Thank you, Amy ! Your kind review is appreciated.

:) Brandy

[Amy R]

You're welcome 😊

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the brevity of this makes it even more powerful.
j.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Jacob. Sometimes less is so much more. : )

[Arundass TP]

A poetry flowing murmuring. Excellent writing 💯

[Brandy]

Thank you, Arundass. Your thoughts are appreciated. : )

[Lorry]

It would be ideal to fly away on the wind and soar far from this complex reality.
It is on my bucket list to be free from the life that keeps getting in the way of living, after I catch up with the 18,004 things that precede it!
Beautifully written.

[Brandy]

What a wonderful feeling, indeed, being one with the wind. In dreams, anything is possible. : )read moreWhat a wonderful feeling, indeed, being one with the wind. In dreams, anything is possible. : )

Of course, reality doesn't exist there.

Thank you Lorry, for your lovely review.

[Lorry]

Even betterer! 😃

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

you capture joy in such a vivd way in this verse. i eel this high on my good days and it is just like that. but in this short work there are also signs of vulnerability. 'an ache to perfectly entwine' as if knowing this happiness can be taken away. it is a very textural work with that i really vibed with.

[Brandy]

Dear Ern, that ache to entwine in perfect harmony seems to linger.

I appreciate you and your kind review. : )

[Dave W.]

Absoulutley fantastic, it's good to see your writing here again.

[Brandy]

Thank you so much, Dave. I like the way you used ' absolutely ' in your review.

I'm smiling. : )
I appreciate you reading my poetic whispers.

[Ballpark Frank]

Very sweet! Very poetic, and expertly delivered.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Frank. Your kind review is appreciated. :)