Ivory

~ Sultry Simplicity ~

 

. . like a famous composer tickling the ivory,

         you create a timeless melody,
                                                    within me

Author's Note

* longing and lingering *
Image- Imgur.com

Reviews

[Thomas W Case]

Beautiful work. I love it.

[Ballpark Frank]

Very sweetly romantic. I love it.

[Brandy]

Thank you Franky, for your lovely review.

[Ken Simm.]

Such simple yet complex beauty.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Ken. Sometimes less is so much more.

[Relic]

Proof a poem doesn't have to be long to get you right in the heart.
Well done, Brandy. :)

[Amy R]

Oh wow, very sensual yet sweet.. Thanks for sharing such a playful loving poem..
-Amy

[Brandy]

Thank you, Amy. Your thoughts bring a smile. My best to you. :) Brandy

[Amy R]

You're welcome 😊

[Lisasview]

First read of yours Brandy and I did so enjoy your words
Very nice image to complement your words....
I have gone back to read your words several times and thinking of the deeper meanings hidden behind them....I really like this part of your simple but deep poem...
Yes, "lingering and longing"...how true...
"Timeless melody within me"
Sometimes ones feeling do not need a lot of words to express them.
I plan to read more as soon as I can...
All my very best.....
Lisa, now in Spain

[Brandy]

It's nice to meet you, Lisa.

A beautiful melody within longs to linger.
There's something about the soothing sound of those ivory keys that seem to leave me breathless.

Creating a sweet and sultry mood.

I appreciate your lovely review.
So true, sometimes less is so much more.

My best to you.
~ Brandy

[Lisasview]

You are so very welcome,
Lisa

[Lorry]

Some people just press all the right buttons for us. Well all but the one that makes them a part of our reality!
Nicely penned.
Sometimes it is harder to be sucksinke...sucsi...less wordy than volumenu... volyumen...bigly wordy! 😃

[Brandy]

Smiling at you. So true, Lorry. When that moment is found, a beautiful melody lingers again and again. :)

Your thoughts leave me in awe.

Thank you for this lovely review.

[Snow_]

Sweet just like you actually
I think of poetry as mirror
You see what is in you
Not your face
But what's in your heart

[Brandy]

So kind of you to say, Snow. : )
You're right about poetry being a mirror.
It does reflect what's inside the heart.

Your thoughts bring a smile.

[Snow_]

ahh thanks...Glad I could bring a smile in this dark times

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

loved this blend of sexy and sweet. will read it to (one of) my lovers (just kidding).

[Brandy]

Thank you, Ern. The moment within is beautiful and sensual.

Of, course. : ) Your thoughts bring a smile.

[Dave W.]

Like a beautiful piano piece, a song that only two can play.

[Brandy]

Piano music creates a beautiful mood for me . . .

A soft, sensual melody lingers within.
One that connects two in such a wonderful way.

Thank you Dave, for your kind review. : )

[Dave W.]

It really does strike my hearts chords and for a moment I am transported and all disappears,

[Brandy]

I'm smiling. : ) Floating is a nice feeling, indeed.