keep

~ Something Dreamy ~

sun shadows through my hair
in my heart you drift, before sleep
daylight dreams dancing everywhere
heart-prints glide, almost there
you are a dream i wish to keep

stars upon my pillow
in my heart you drift, before sleep
wishes collect on the window
my thoughts whispering low
you are a dream i wish to keep

wind with clouds, seasons glow
in my heart you drift, before sleep
halo on the moon, an echo
touch of you, ache to know
you are a dream i wish to keep

Author's Note

syllable count - 68868

Reviews

[Trace]

We don't see form poetry much anymore, but this is a beautiful and romantic work.

Nicely penned, Trace

[Brandy]

It's a nice challenge, to write in a form every so often. :) This one is dreamy . . .
read moreIt's a nice challenge, to write in a form every so often. :) This one is dreamy . . .

Your thoughts are appreciated, Trace.

[Trace]

Brings back memories of when l was at another site that had challenges.
I became a better poet

[Brandy]

Change in a different direction is good sometimes, because when that happens, you do become better person. A better poet as well.

[Levi Levin]

Nicely written piece indeed. Reminds me of “All I Have To Do Is Dream”.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Levi. : )
I really like that song. In a dream, anything is possible.
read moreThank you, Levi. : )
I really like that song. In a dream, anything is possible.

I appreciate your lovely review.

[Levi Levin]

That’s very true indeed….your welcome.

[Snow_]

I was amazed by your poise and elegance. Shining through the page of this black and white website.

[Brandy]

Thank you, Snow ! Your kind words bring a smile. : )

[Snow_]

You are surely welcme:D

[Throwing Romeo]

Beautiful patches of memories stiched into the quilt
tucked around the edges of hope ,longing touches
of.desire before streams of morning light takes them away.
Lovely cadence flows like a dream.
R.

[Brandy]

Such a sweet review. : )
Thank you, Romeo.

I like this line: ' Beautiful patches of memories stitched into the quilt. ' Makes sense in many ways. Beautiful dreams are lovely moments pieced together to create a breathtaking memory.

My heart is smiling. : )

[Ern M. Yoshimoto]

i don't know who this was meant for, but i actually thought about lulling a baby to sleep. i have may nieces and nephews and i sometimes babysit. that magical moment of watching a small child sleeping is just priceless. and the poem was written beautifully. i really liked "daylight dreams dancing everywhere," the alliteration really smacked.
i might have misinterpreted it but i nevertheless really enjoyed this poem!

[Brandy]

This is about a lingering dream, the desire to keep someone close.

: ) Such a nice thing to say, Ern. The mood does feel like a lullaby.

Thank you for sharing your favorite thought within. : ) I'm enjoying using alliterations in my poetry.

I appreciate your kind review.

[Snow_]

The models seems to be similar....In some way...Is this you?

[Brandy]

No, this isn't me in the photo on the poem.

[Lorry]

Nicely captured moment to ensure a happynightnightdreamysleep!
We all need more of these with the dreaded winter approaching.
Nice work.

[Brandy]

' happynightnightdreamysleep. ' : )
I like that. So cute and creative.

When night falls, I'm ready to curl around a cloud and caress a dream. : )

Thank you Lorry, for your lovely review.

[Dave W.]

A dream is like a passing shadow out the corner of the eye and soon forgotten, a fragrance familiar. Great poem....

[Brandy]

Anything can happen in a dream. :)

I like your thought: A familiar fragrance or perhaps a passing shadow.

Thank you, Dave. Your review brings a smile to my heart. :)

[Dave W.]

I also say the same kind of thing except I say "You make my heart happy", great minds Brandy, great minds......

[Brandy]

Awe, thanks Dave.
Great minds. . . think alike. :)

[Arundass TP]

Excellent poem. I feel really muscical in approach. Loved it

[Brandy]

Moments are dreamy and romantic. Thank you Arundass, for your lovely review. :)

[Arundass TP]

Welcome friend 😊