On the other side of suicide

I know how you were feeling

You told me

But the way that you are dealing

With the

Problems in this world don't make sense to me

From downstairs

I hear you cry

I run to your side

As a friend to help

Get through hell

I can tell

Just how you are feeling

But I don't know the half of it

It is like a hit

To the gut

When I feel you close shut

And I see your walls start to implode

While your feelings explode

At war over space in your mind

At the point you draw the line

and I hear a loud sound

And it resonates around

Inside my head as I rush to you 

I see what I have found

I see a chair on its side

Just barely out of the room

I see a rope

Just the tail of the figure of doom

I feel my hands shaking

I feel my pulse raising

I feel my lips saying

No this can't be

As I look in and see

I yell out in pain

And I run in and fall.

Slowly.

Falling.

Down.

As I hit the ground

I feel my soul devour itself

From the pain

Of the emptiness

Mixed with the loneliness

I've lost my light

In the dark

Now burning bright

Is the death of my heart

As I see you lifeless

There in my arms

And I want you to wake up

To sit up with a start

But I know this can't happen

You left me today

I swear to you

Your memory

Will never fade. 

Reviews

[Relic]

I don't think you need commas in this. Suicide is horrible. Enough said. And this is sad too.