Tribute to suicide

-------------WARNING-----------

-----This is more of a song-----

A rope dangles from the rooftop,

Feel the chair drop and your neck pop, you watch the world fade away

You watch the world fade to gray. 

Life was sad up to the end, and death was your one and only friend. 

Yeahhh

Your hear the click- bullet in the chamber, life's pull was strong, but death's greater. Cold metal in your mouth, feel the trigger, feel a sharp pain, getting bigger. Everything I ever said, can't take the bullet back out your head, Never thought that it would end like this and your gone.

Standing on the edge, got the courage, my life stunk so ill end it. I hope I never fade away, I hope you never leave my graaave, I hope you never leave my graaave. My grave

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

How dark and daring very brave. I love how you've worded it although to me it did bring back some painful memories still powerful in poetry to do so! I know you note that it is for a song but still I think your layout could use some revision. A great piece keep them coming!