But You're Still My Heart.....

But You're Still My Heart.....

A Poem by TripleCK

"You've built a love but that love falls apart."
I want to believe my path is chosen
Broken
Gone
Disgusted
My bags are nearly packed, and still I hesitate.
"Listen to your heart when he's calling for you."
Listening to words that inspire
Fear
Uncertainty
Confusion
Everything but the thought that this is right.
"And there are voices that want to be heard. So much to mention
but you can't find the words."
You hurt me more than I can say
Betrayed
Forgotten
Deserted
Nothing you say holds trust for us.
"...I don't know why..."
And yet I want this to work
Working
Holding
Loving
Everything that once was and that which you promised.
"...listen to your heart before you tell him goodbye."

© 2011 TripleCK


Author's Note

TripleCK
The words in quotation marks (and in various shades of red) are from Listen to Your Heart by Roxette.

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very creative and emotional in a sense. :) i tried giving u 1000/100 but its saying its greater than 100.. ik that it is. thts y i gave u it

Posted 13 Years Ago


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