Falling

Am I falling once again?

Is that what I am feeling?

Only feeling the air rushing beneath me

Rushing towards black

Like spinning in chairs around a room

Like caged, thinking you're free

Running in circles in your mind

Chasing crazy dreams

They tell you to die

They tell you to jump

Jumping never leads to flying

But falling

Always falling

Never flying

They lead you to think you will fly

So you follow

And you fail

They LIE

And you're doomed to fall for eternity

Reviews

[Jean]

I like this, its vague and allows the reader to interpret the specific meaning on their own, for what it means to them personally.

"Like caged, thinking you're free" - this lines doesn't make grammatical sense. It should be "like being caged"

I also like the slight alliteration with falling, flying, follow, fail, free, feeling, etc.

:)