Star Evenwood

Here in this magical land known simply as Star Evenwood

Where enchantment seeps into every rock and crevasse

As the turquoise waters swell amidst great froth and joy

Lost so long ago, now just a myth of mariners from afar

Where enchantment seeps into every rock and crevasse

In Evenwood, giant butterflies of every color and pattern soar

Lost so long ago, now just a myth of mariners from afar

These creatures form fanciful sails as the banners fly free

In Evenwood, giant butterflies of every color and pattern soar

And the sky is a deep and stunningly rich cobalt blue

These creatures form fanciful sails as the banners fly free

With sweeping peaks of adoring clouds all dressed up in white

And the sky is a deep and stunningly rich cobalt blue

As the turquoise waters swell amidst great froth and joy

With sweeping peaks of adoring clouds all dressed up in white

Here in this magical land known simply as Star Evenwood

Reviews

[Zahra]

This is beautiful and unique. Nice imagery.

[Emerald Seas]

What an unusual style for this piece. I like it! The interchange of repeated lines adds to the magical feel. Nicely done, my friend!

[BLBrown]

It is called a Pantoum. My first attempt. I really enjoyed writing it. You write 8 lines first (A - H), then there is a distinct repeat pattern you must follow...it is a challenge because each stanza has to stand on its own and make sense.