The Meadow

peace seranity scene

The soft sweet breeze

making the flowers sway

The golden sun warming your legs

The sweet scent of flowers fill your nose

Daisies as white as snow

make a soft cushion also

Author's Note

hope you like I know it's short i was hoping it would be one of those short and and sweet to the point

Reviews

[Leigh]

You took me there with this one and packed a lot in, making every word count, thanks for sharing

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

Ur welcome, thanks for reading!

[Mark Anthony Games (Hum..]

You manage to get so much in to so few lines, you have a gift no doubting.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks ive loved books since like 5th grade thet really make me think. and sometimes how it could have gone in another direction

[Felicity's Eve]

Short, sweet, and awesome. It gave me such relaxation when I read this. ^^

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks I was reading eclipse when I thought of a poem like this, and I mentally saw it in my head

[Felicity's Eve]

Cool! I read the Twilight Saga. So did my mom... She is a real fan-girl about it.... :/

Same with anime and other books that I think she steals from my room. ^^

Lol she's a pretty cool mom. :)

And you are totally welcome.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

I love the twilight books I just havent read Twilight and I want to read Breaking Dawn again

[Felicity's Eve]

I think Breaking Dawn was the best book out of the four.

I am not obsessed with Twilight or anything, but it was still pretty good.

I was reluctant to read it at first because I thought it was plot-less and kinda stupid, but I ended up glad I read it. :)

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

me too I think the movie and book are better then the rest of the movies and books

[Felicity's Eve]

Same here ^^

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

yeah really good writer I wish they could put everything form the book into the movies

[Felicity's Eve]

Yeah... There are some things that were a shame to cut

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

I KNOW

[Felicity's Eve]

*wistful sigh*

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

*me too*

[Felicity's Eve]

:)

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

:)

[CecilA]

It is certainly short, sweet and to the point and I enjoyed it. Actually, I would like to hear a little more; perhaps that's your ruse.

Other that a couple of grammer fixes, I'd pass it on.

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks if I have any ideas Ill add on

[Sid]

Short and to the point as you wanted it to be, it paints a beautiful picture with just a few words...good write!

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thank you

[Horizon K.]

Very sweet:) A few spelling errors though.

[The Invisible Girl]

Short and sweet! Great job!! :D

[Art Lover/Love Writing]

thanks i was hoping it woudlnt be to short