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Exuberant Joy

Exuberant Joy

A Poem by Bonnie
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I created 2 versions of this poem and liked them both. So here are both versions.

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The sun's warmth and light

Children playing and laughing

Exuberant joy

 

The sun's warmth and light

Water fountain, gentle sounds

Exuberant joy

© 2008 Bonnie


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Bonnie
I'm curious which version you like better. It was a difficult choice for me to pick one.

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I loved it both, Bonnie! The first one gave me such a wonderful feeling since I love watching my children laughing and playing, the exuberant joy it brings. The second one for me is, when the children leaves and it's quiet enough that you can hear the gentle sounds of a water fountain and the exuberant joy that brings as well ... I loved it! Beautifully written ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I loved it both, Bonnie! The first one gave me such a wonderful feeling since I love watching my children laughing and playing, the exuberant joy it brings. The second one for me is, when the children leaves and it's quiet enough that you can hear the gentle sounds of a water fountain and the exuberant joy that brings as well ... I loved it! Beautifully written ... hugs

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Bonnie
Bonnie

Rimrock, AZ



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I love to write. People have encouraged me to share my inspirational poems. My friend Dianne encouraged me to join this community years ago. I haven't been active recently. I enjoy sharing with member.. more..

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