Joy

Joy

A Poem by Bonnie

Joy comes from within

Bubbling up like fresh water

Well overflowing

© 2008 Bonnie


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Joy and the origin of such emotions, the distance happiness has to travel, such expression allows
the reader to personalize the meaning to his or her personal understanding, the indivisual within,

I really liked the feature describing the bubbling coming to surface in an effervescence manner,
like fresh water, like soul refreshed, I really enjoy the subtkle encouraging meaning describing the

well overflowing, work that speaks valumes in simplicity, uplifting and very well written, thanks.
Take Care, Mike


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Simple yet beautiful. You convey so much truth and beauty in such few words. Thank you for sharing this gift. Today there is joy in my heart and I have you to thank for that.

Bless You!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I share your passion for the Haiku, Senryu Tanka and Dodoitsu genre. Your write hits all the right notes for me � excellent composition and structure!

Phill(ozofee)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the third line the best.
It's beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful, and well thought out.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

that's definitely joy. very nice.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like this. It is simple and clean, and I think it describes the feeling of joy perfectly.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 2, 2008
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Bonnie
Bonnie

Rimrock, AZ



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I love to write. People have encouraged me to share my inspirational poems. My friend Dianne encouraged me to join this community years ago. I haven't been active recently. I enjoy sharing with member.. more..

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