Womb SnatchersA Story by bbaA short story about one of the famous creatures in the Philippines: Tik-tikThe
young woman stood stiffly on the damp ground. She could have been mistaken for
a statue if not for the rise and fall of her chest, and the blinking of her
eyes. She appeared mystical among the wild trees and the spread of grass on the
empty lot as if a goddess tending to her secret garden. The darkness daunted her as it did a month ago when she
first stood at the same spot. She knew she could never erase the anger that
engulfed her. The
earth was hard to dig. The afternoon sun had baked the ground dry, compressed
to a great impenetrable mass. And yet she scratched the earth as if nothing
else in the world mattered. She dug. And she dug. And she dug until the fragile skin of her hands blistered
and bled. The night did not allow her to see how deep she had gone.
She had to grope the edges to know the depth and width of the hole she made.
About a foot and a half, she measured from her outstretched hand up to her
elbow, she stopped digging. She placed the shoebox down the hole then gently pushed
back the earth over it that it took her twice the time to cover the hole than
to dig it. She thought about the prayers she learned when she was a
child. Of the hundreds of amens, she seemed to have forgotten them all. “Take my baby to paradise,” she whispered. “Keep him.” Wings
fluttered on the outskirts of the forested lot. These are the creatures of the
night; they circled the black sky as predators stalk their hapless prey. Their high
screeching sound, their secret language, revealed the intensity of their
excitement. Tonight, they would have their fill. Maggie
was pregnant. She never knew she was; not until she was well on her way to the
end of her first trimester. The pressures of her job prevented her from
noticing the changes on her body. She would always have the excuse of stress
for having her frequent headaches, and of her unsteady diet for her clammy
stomach. What would Tyler say? The thought of her husband made her
choose to keep the pregnancy a secret until a chance arose. This would have been her fourth child if not for the
miscarriages. The first mishap was easily accepted. I don’t blame you. These things
happen. We’ll try again, Tyler
had whispered to her supportively. He held her close on his arms and stroked
her head in an effort to console her. Regardless, he would never know the
feeling of loss that burnt a hole on her soul. She cried on his shoulders
thinking if she would ever be the same again. The second death brought only silence. No soothing words;
no encouragements. No soft pat on the head or a gentle squeeze of the hand. The
deafening silence built up and was nurtured to a state of denial. Tyler slept
on the couch every night and did not talk to her for weeks. They never talked
about what happened. And sometimes Maggie was unsure if it really did happen or
if it was just a bad dream. Yet again when the third child was denied the hope of
breathing the air, Tyler became distant and mean. He blamed Maggie for
everything. The slightest accident - the unintentional breaking of a glass, or
the burnt casserole for dinner - set off Tyler’s rage, his furious bellows filled
the entire house. In time, Tyler found distraction in a glass of whiskey or a bottle
of gin that never helped to ease the situation but only added to the cumulative
dilemmas they were facing. Maggie never understood her husband’s rage. There was no
reason why he should make her feel incompetent - like it was all her damn
fault. Her doctor agreed with her. She was a perfectly healthy
twenty-nine year old woman, the doctor said. No signs of defect in her uterus;
no abnormalities of the womb. The MIR showed nothing; and the blood samples and
tests were all negative of any disease or virus. A tumor or a cancer would have
been welcomed just to shed a light to the three unexplained premature
expulsions. The only thing the doctor could do for her was to recommend her to
a pregnancy group that could hopefully help her and guide her through the
pregnancy. She took the advice halfheartedly; she actually felt a bit insulted.
Maggie never went to any pregnancy group. The second trimester made her pregnancy more evident. Maggie’s
blouses became uncomfortably tight and her jeans became one size too small; she
could no longer fit to some of her clothes. She needed to tell Tyler. Tyler’s side of the bed was cold and empty when Maggie
woke up in the middle of the night. She had been waking up recently in the wee
hours - particularly from the sound of the fluttering wings, beating on the
windows as if bats were lost and disoriented and mistaking her window for the
entrance to their caves. Sometimes, the resonant tick-tick sounds made by the
animals would snatch her away from her sleep. Maggie called Tyler’s office on the third day he did not
come home only to be told that her husband was busy and would call her as soon
as possible. The voice at the other end of the line assured Maggie that Tyler
would definitely come home tonight. Maggie doubted it. He could stay in his
precious office forever for all she cared. Five days passed, and Tyler’s absence in the house became
tolerable. Maggie felt neither worried nor glad - she learned to become
indifferent to Tyler’s presence and situation. And of course, why would she
worry about anything else if there was a baby on the way. The next day, Tyler called Maggie and told her that he
had filed for divorce. She did not ask for any explanation. Maggie did not beg,
or shout, or cry like Tyler thought she would. She held her composure. Her
deadpan voice masked the fury boiling inside her. Maggie
felt their wings fluttered above her head. The air swept her hair in front of
her face. She did not need to look up to see them; she knew they were up there
upon hearing their tick-tick calls. She knew they would come for her. They
smelled the baby inside her. She thought about the child she should have had. She
thought about how they took her baby away. The crushing memory of the loss
fueled her rage. The
night’s chilly hands crept through the window and touched Maggie’s skin. Her
face was uneasy. Even in her sleep, she could hear the creatures’ tick-tick
sound. A figure stood outside the window. A shape of an old
woman loomed on the moonlit night. Her face was shrunken but had eyes like that
of an old veteran of war. She was naked, and her frail body with her withered
skin and bony frame revealed the effects of time. She had wings… leathery wings
made her look like an enormous bat. The creature had her hands on the window. She scratched her
long, dirty fingernails fervently on the panel between the glass and the wooden
frame until it created a small hole - enough for a pinky to slide through. She
turned her head towards the hole then sniffed the fragrance of the pregnant
woman. Her food awaited. She opened her mouth and out slithered the long black tongue.
The tongue squirmed through the hole; its slimy surface caused it to slide in
with ease. The tongue found Maggie’s knee and slipped up to her thigh toward
her crotch. Maggie felt the thing enter her. The feeling brought back
the memory of the first time she and Tyler slept together. Then the thing tugged something out of her. The contraction jolted Maggie to sit up, and she felt
pain in her belly as if someone had poured boiling water on her. She looked
down between her legs and saw the small head of her baby and the proboscis
extending out of the room. The black tongue was wrapped around the neck and tip
was inside the mouth of the fetus. Maggie screamed. The creature retracted her black tongue and flew back
toward the bosom of the night. The young woman sat on the bed with her legs wide open,
terror etched across her face as she stared down at the small head protruding
between her legs. The baby’s face appeared to be sleeping - white and silent. But Maggie knew her baby was dead. Maggie
calculated her move. With her eyes closed, she followed the creatures’ aerial
laps, her heartbeat setting the pace. She tightened her grip on the stingray’s tail with her
right hand. The whip felt awkward on her hand; the coarse abrasive texture would
easily scrape off the skin on her palm if she swung it hard. But the pain would
not bother her. She was ready to feel pain as she was ready to inflict it. “I know
why,” the nurse said in a hushed tone the moment the doctor left the
examination room. Maggie remembered the nurse looking at her as if she knew
what caused the miscarriages, what the doctor missed out. Maggie turned to the nurse,
doubtful of what she knew and what she was about to tell her. But there was
something in the nurse’s eyes and the tone of her voice that held a ring of
truth. Maggie asked the nurse why. There
were three of them, she figured, and she planned to kill them all. Kill them
for taking her babies. Destroy them as they destroyed her life. “Something
ate your babies,” she said. Maggie stared at her, too shocked for words. But the nurse
did not need to explain more. Maggie already knew exactly what she was going
into. When she was just a girl, Maggie had heard tales of a
creature that sucks the baby from a pregnant woman’s belly. She never believed
the stories and she would not believe it now from this nurse. Maggie was
desperate to do anything to prevent losing her baby, but this was too much for
her. Having three miscarriages
would make anyone mad, she
thought, but I’m not about to
give up my sanity by believing this nurse. “I’m sorry,” Maggie said. “I don’t know what you’re
talking about. Excuse me.” For
a long time, Maggie blamed herself for all that happened. Her whole life seemed
to have been heading for one tragedy after another, and there was no one to point
a finger at except at her. Her babies died. Her husband left. She had nothing to live for except to kill these
creatures. Maggie
felt the cold hand of the nurse on her arm as she turned to walk out of the
room. “I don’t blame you if you don’t believe me,” the nurse
said. “But please, let me help you.” Maggie felt her tears trickle down her cheeks, not
bothering to wipe them off. It had been a long time since she last heard words
of sympathy. She led herself to believe that the world was against her and
there was no hope for her. What does this stranger know about me? She
asked herself. Nobody can help
me. There
were many chances Maggie allowed to slip that could have stopped what happened If she had told
Tyler about her fourth child, he would have stayed. If she had only listened
to the nurse, her baby would be alive. Maggie opened her eyes and looked down to the ground. A
small patch of earth had been disturbed right where she was standing. She could
have buried her baby properly right next to its older siblings. But what would
everyone say? Nobody would believe her. Nobody would understand. “I can
help you if you’d let me,” the nurse said as if reading her thoughts. “I know a
way to stop them.” Maggie shook her head. “No,” she answered, walking out of the room. As she reached the street, the cool afternoon air wafted
on her face. She stopped a few paces away from the automated sliding doors and
thought of going back inside. How could she run away from the only person who might be
able to help her? When did she become distrustful? She averted her eyes from
the passing people; they all appeared to stare at her, judging her, telling her
that it was all her damn fault. She let her emotions guide her and she continued to walk
away from the clinic. Many bad things had happened in her life; self-doubt
crept in without her realizing it. She regretted many things, none more so than
walking out of the clinic. She
swung her right arm above her head. The low branch rustled as the thin whip
slashed through the air, clipping off a handful of leaves that fell slowly to
the ground. Maggie looked up and saw nothing but the low canopy and the black
sky. She had hit nothing. Behind her, the familiar tick-tick sound once again
filled her ears. The creature stood there with its large leathery wings
flapping gently on its back like a bird newly landed. Its bony arms were raised
on its side, forming a half-circle as if reaching for an embrace. Its black
tongue flicked up and down in front of its face, savoring the sweet smell of
its meal. Its black glossy eyes surveyed Maggie intently, intrigued
why the pregnant woman had not yet run away as had all the others upon seeing
it. No matter - it’s the meat in her womb it wants. The creature’s first step was met by the swing of the
whip. The stinger’s tail sliced its old sagging face. The shriek of creature
was like the sound of a crying infant, high and piercing. Maggie swung again, hitting the hands that held its
bleeding face. Half of its digits fell to the ground. It turned around and poised itself to take flight when
Maggie slashed once again, this time hitting one of its wings and cutting it
almost in half. The creature half jumped and half flew before crashing to
the ground. It whimpered like an infant, attempting to coax the woman to stop
her attack. But not a faint trace of mercy showed in Maggie’s determined face. Maggie held the whip above her head with both hands and
looked down the creature. The creature’s shriveled face contorted in pain; its
cry, like a hungry baby’s cry, only made Maggie even angrier. The stingray’s tail found the creature’s neck and the
blow was followed with a sputtering of blood. Maggie raised her weapon again
and struck, again and again, unlit the remaining flesh that held its head to
its body was completely cut off. The sound of the
infant’s crying quieted down to a gargle. Then it stopped. Maggie looked up the sky. It was empty. She could no longer hear the other creatures circling
above her. The dying wail of their kind drove them away. Maggie prayed they
would fly far and hard - away from her and her baby. Maggie stood in the fading darkness for a long time. Her
hands and her jeans were soaked in blood; the smell was strong and made her
sick. But that did not matter. She wanted to stand there forever, to make sure the
creature was dead, and to make sure it would never eat any more babies. The
first rays of the sun pierced through the sky. Nine months later, Maggie’s first child was born. The End © 2011 bbaAuthor's Note
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