With Matching Dior Handbag by B.P.SmytheA Story by B.P.SmytheNever...never...blackmail a woman holding a hammer...SOW AND YOU SHALL REAP by Barry Smythe (Kindle Edition - 11 Dec 2011) - Kindle eBook
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12) By nine-forty it wasn’t busy. Basildon Central was winding down for the day. The diesel with its four carriages was in. Elizabeth made her way past four seated people and sat as near as possible to the carriage door. She eyed them; two gentlemen and an elderly couple. The couple smiled at her as she took her seat. Opening the newspaper quickly she buried her face pretending to read more on the two day old moon landing news with another photo of Neil Armstrong, this time posing with his family. Elizabeth clutched her bag. Why the s**t did he ask for her new Dior handbag for the drop? Why not an old carrier bag or something? He must have been watching when she bought it in Harrods. She’d spent ages finding one to match the shoes and gloves. It was like rubbing salt into the wound. She felt like deducting it from what he wanted. Then she thought better. She’d managed to scrape four thousand pounds together. Elizabeth had put a letter with the money; hoped to appeal to his good nature. Told him there wasn’t enough time; asked for another couple of weeks to get the extra thousand. Just hoped he’d buy it. Whoever it was had her arse nailed to the barn door, and knew it. Elizabeth mulled it over as she rocked with the motion of the train. He could have gone to the police when he found the wallet, along with the business card inside it and her phone number on the back; plus the photo of her and the murdered punter. He could have collected the five-hundred pounds reward, then and there. But oh no. This slippery b*****d wanted more. And, the worrying thing? He knew who she was. Where she lived. Had followed her. Made the telephone call, probably in a disguised voice, although she was sure it was a bloke. She put a hand into her pocket. Felt the handle. It reassured her. At Laindon station the last of the four passengers got off. The carriage was now empty. Elizabeth got up and slightly swayed with the train as she moved to a seat near the door. She sat down then shifted uncomfortably. Was he going to go through with it? Had he changed his mind? Chickened out? Would he cut his losses? Take it to the police? Tell them he’d found the wallet. Collect the reward? Suddenly there was a blast on the driver’s horn and Elizabeth lurched sideways as the train braked sharply and then slurred to a halt. She got up tentatively and moved to a window. Elizabeth shielded her eyes from the reflected light and tried to look out. But it was too dark. Before she parted with four-thousand pounds she had to make sure this was the spot. She pushed the carriage door window down and leant out. There was a crossing up ahead all lit up. A man with a torch, probably the driver, was playing the beam around, surveying something at the front of the train. Elizabeth turned as the interconnecting carriage door opened and the ticket collector walked through. A large fat man wearing a cap and wreaking of stale tobacco, with a waist that could easily have burst his British Rail uniform trousers, looked around and then spoke loudly in a well prepared, off-pat, reassuring little speech. ‘Just to let you know we have an obstruction on the line and the matter is being dealt with. Please do not make any attempt to get off the train, and don’t worry, we will be moving shortly.’ With that he closed the door and was gone. Elizabeth was convinced. This had to be the drop. She took the bag, leaned out the carriage window and looked into the darkness. She swung the cream coloured bag backwards and forwards in an exaggerated motion. She wanted to stand out, wanted him to see where she was going to throw it. With a heave she let go and it bounced and rolled, then came to rest across the opposite line. ‘S**t!’ Elizabeth muttered. She stared down into the darkness and could make out the cream shape sitting smack on the polished steel strip. She looked up startled. In the faint distance she could see the lights of an opposing train approaching. Elizabeth’s expression turned to horror. Instant thoughts flashed through her mind. The train could be derailed, the money all chewed up under the wheels. She had to do something, get it off the line and quick. Mustn’t let him see me. Don’t want him to think I’m taking the money back. Elizabeth crouched and made her way to the other side of the carriage. She got to the door, pushed the window down then put her hand through and turned the handle. It swung open. There was a steep embankment directly opposite. Not a lot of space, but enough. In that split second she was grateful she’d worn sensible shoes. ‘Jesus!’ Elizabeth cried out as she hit the steep grass then rolled back under a large steel wheel. She frantically scrambled out from underneath the carriage thinking it might start rolling again at any moment and hauled herself up. Brushing herself down she temporarily examined a grazed knee and torn stocking. She listened out; all quiet apart from the hissing of the diesel up front. Using the carriage as support she carefully trod her way to the back of the train. Suddenly, crunching noises. Someone nearby walking on the sleeper gravel. Elizabeth crouched, as she peered around the end carriage she could see the cream bag and a figure approaching. The silhouette of what looked like a man appeared, picking his way along the track; stopping, looking around, moving on then stopping again. Now outside away from the glare of the windows it was a clear night. Elizabeth wasn’t sure, was it a railway worker doing his job? Last minute checks before moving off? If it was, where was his torch? Even so, once he clocked the bag the money would be gone? She knew what she had to do. The figure stopped. At about thirty feet away it spotted the bag. It began to move quickly, coming towards her. Then the horn of the approaching train sounded. The figure checked himself, looked at the oncoming lights and continued faster. Elizabeth felt in her pocket. She took out the hammer and held it down by her side. Then the figure tripped and half stumbled to one knee. ‘S**t, you mother…’ Elizabeth was near enough to hear his cursing. He got up, brushed himself down. Up front the horn sounded again and her own train started moving off. Her cover was gone. Elizabeth crouched in the dark, but his eyes were only for her cream bag containing all that money. On the opposite line the chugging of the leading diesel carriage was getting louder. He was now at the bag. The figure stooped to pick it up; then tried to open it. He was having trouble with the clasp. Elizabeth had twenty feet to cover. She looked behind. The diesel was getting nearer; looming out of the dark like a giant angry serpent, all lit up, spewing out its rage. He opened the bag and got the money; standing there totally oblivious, feverishly tearing at the newspaper she’d wrapped it in. The approaching noise drowned out her footsteps. With the hammer at shoulder height Elizabeth moved in with that fixated and purposeful look. Like a Lioness that had crept behind a wildebeest on its knees at a water hole, she was upon him, swinging the hammer to the back of his head. He half turned as the blow glanced off then she hit him again above the right eye. He swore at her, ‘you f*****g b***h!’ Then grabbed at her arm, pulling her down. Elizabeth was on top trying to hit him but he had her arm. Then, with her left hand she threw gravel in his eyes. Wincing and blinking he let go to rub them then screamed as she smashed the hammer into his face. Sitting astride him she swung again, then froze. She knew this man, even with the black blood pouring down his face. It was Boris, the owner of the pawn shop. His doorway was part of her patch where the punters cruised by. ‘Boris, what the f**k…?’ ‘Get off me, you b***h!’ ‘Give me back my money?’ Knowing him had taken the sting out of it. She dropped the hammer. The noise behind her was deafening. Elizabeth could feel the approaching heat, smell the warm sickly oil. They were lit up in the train’s beam. The horn sounded again. He reached inside his jacket and got tangled up trying to pull out a gun. She caught a glimpse of steel and instantly grabbed at it. It went off, and then fired off again with his finger on the trigger and her hand clutching the barrel - she shouted with the pain from the heat of the gun. Still astride him they wrestled, both her hands now holding his with the gun. She let go with one, feverishly clawing at the gravel until her fingers felt the wooden handle. She grabbed at it and swung the hammer down into his face. Blood from his broken nose sprayed her. He screamed with the pain and it made him drop the gun. Again she tried to get up, but he was pulling her down on top of him. Even with his injuries Boris wrestled with her, screaming at her, ‘You b***h! You f*****g b***h!’ Elizabeth lay there on her back, not quite believing; breathing in deep snatches as she looked at the stars. All of a sudden she felt cold and started to shiver. She held up her hands, mesmerized by them; they were covered in blood. Stepfather Ralph was a Pentecostal preacher; a healer from the Deep South. Back where he came from, a 1950’s trailer park in Louisiana, he would tell a young Elizabeth the gun was kept under his pillow to keep the n*****s in line. Saturday night they’d get drunk and come into town lookin’ for white girls. Then he’d squeeze up his cheeks and spit on the floor. Elizabeth leant back and took deep breaths, then spat some phlegm a couple of times. She dabbed her mouth with her sleeve, then wiped the money using the same sleeve and placed the bundle of twenty- pound notes, fastened with an elastic band into her bag. She relaxed. Elizabeth gazed through the windscreen, trance like, not really seeing. She took another small swig; the initial sting now dulled into a warm glow. After a few minutes her eyelids grew heavy; they flickered briefly and closed. The brandy bottle slipped slowly from her fingers. She said a few things incomprehensible, then twitched as sleep took over. © 2011 B.P.Smythe |
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