True Beauty

I have had 3 people tell me they really like this one. But I feel like it needs work... 7/17/11

Open your eyes
And open your heart
Then maybe see
The beauty around

The forest there
The children right here
The far away girl
The stumbling man

Take a real pause
And close both your eyes
Now look with your faith
So you can see the truth

God's wonderful creations
Surrounding you there
And realize, my dear
That you are one too

Reviews

[Jeremia]

I think it is wonderful. It is one of those that cause people to stop and think/relax. It is kinda eye opening.