About You

Just a little something I wrote one night I had inspiration :)

I want to write you a poem

But worthy words escape me

All the simple adjectives I know

None of them can compare

To you and everything you mean to me

 

I’m not saying you’re perfect

Because I know your biggest flaw

You play with my feelings

But honestly, I don’t mind much

As long as you’re still by my side

 

I really wish there were a chance

But you’ve said before that nothing will change

Your feelings will stay the same

And we’ll always be just friends

No matter the nature of my feelings for you

 

I wanted this to be a happy poem

But it seems to have taken a different emotion

Such as longing or simple sadness

Even though that is the truth,

At least I succeeded in making it about you

Reviews

[DrD]

You know, on first reading this work appears terse and somewhat common for the genre. But there is something compelling about it and it led me to read again and I find that the last stanza defines everything and gives a glowing substance to the theme that becomes solemn and dripping with regret. A very, very nice work, young lady.

[That1Nerd23]

So emotion! I love this! I't such a tragic tale, I'm sorry. :/

[Arte Por Vida]

It's okay :) This is about an old crush from over a year ago.. And although the feelings were never returned, it was totally good. He's someone I can really trust.

[That1Nerd23]

That's good that you both are good friends at least. (:

[Arte Por Vida]

Yeah (:

[zainul]

You expressed your sincere love in the poem with honesty and frankness.
Great work.
Loved the whole poem.
Still the following stanza touched my heart.

"I’m not saying you’re perfect

Because I know your biggest flaw

You play with my feelings

But honestly, I don’t mind much

As long as you’re still by my side"