A Rose for You, Some Love for Me

A Rose for You, Some Love for Me

A Poem by Arte Por Vida
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I entered this into a poetry contest. And I really like this one.

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A rose for you
A rose for me
Be careful
Or your fingers may bleed

A symbol of love
So very similar
Both are beautiful
Both can hurt

Though there is pain
It's only temporary
Your fingers will heal
As will your heart

Some love for you
Some love for me
Be careful
But don't be afraid

© 2011 Arte Por Vida


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Arte Por Vida
I would absolutely LOVE feedback on this one.

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I'm no good at giving constructive feedback, however, I will tell you, I do like it. Seems well written and is enjoyable to read.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arte Por Vida

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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