Pardon Me

Also from December 2009

Pardon me for talking,
I don't mean to be a bother.
I don't want to bore you
But some things I can't ignore.
If you just listen you'll see
How my thoughts and feeling
Are slowly killing me.
You clearly don't get it
But that's okay, I'm sorry
I didn't mean to waste your time
I just simply needed someone
To hear what I'm screaming
I'm not alright; I'm not okay
I don't want to stay
I'll leave you alone now.
Sorry I ever got in your way.

Author's Note

Also could probably use more structure.

Reviews

[Jeremia]

This is really sad, but it had nice flow and was a good read. You are never a bother.

[Arte Por Vida]

I wrote this in an extremely sad state of mind. I'm glad it has some flow--kinda surprising. Thanks!