Gone

Something I wrote November 23, 2014

You looked so beautiful last night,

Standing next to me in the rain.

The rain soaked through our clothes,

Leaving chill bumps on our arms.

We laughed about nothing.

And we got lost trying to find our way back.

Everything was absolutely perfect,

And I loved every minute of it.

You looked so beautiful last night,

Asleep next to me.

Every time I woke up,

I would look over to you.

The sight of you making my heart race.

And my stomach do flips.

I would reach out and grasp your hand,

And you would lightly squeeze mine back.

Everything was absolutely perfect,

And I want that back.

Reviews

[Jordan Smith]

I loved this poem. I would say int he first part on the line "And we got lost trying to find out way back.", I would change it up a little bit. But other than that, I really enjoyed the emotion that was put behind this one. Good job :)