my heart goes out

this is for everyone who is my friend on writerscafe.org this is for you ma friends=}

Days went by.

but all i did was cry an cry.

i didn't know who i could trust and beleive.

so i always walked away and wanted to leave.

but today i found a website.

that made my life alright.

a sight that showed me who was really my friends.

with a friendship that never ends.

where my friends comment on my poetry and my story.

i have friends here that love me.

there is not much else that i can say.

but ilove my friends on writerscafe.

by: jamie miller

10/16/09

 

Author's Note

this is for my friends on writerscafe, you know who you are, if i added u lol, you guys have change me in so many ways just by commenting my writing thank u sooo much, you rock,
much love,Jamie Miller

Reviews

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A lovely dedication to your friends i hope i am considered one of your friends jamie this poem really rocked nice smooth flow and wonderful curves which had me mesmerised.

[J.R Schlievert]

very sweet poem! :) and also very sweet how you wrote it for someone you care about! :) very cool of you

[caliban]

your poems are sweet, keep up the good work and happy birthday

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

This is a great place to not only find great talent and inspirational writing but to find friends who share a common interest with you... I have found many myself... what a sweet tribute to those who touched your life.

[Theresa]

This poem is really sweet and heartfelt. I agree with you writerscafe is full of wonderful people who actually seem to care about what we write. Its nice to have that. It's like pulling teeth trying to get feedback from my friends and family so I can totally relate. Thanks for sharing this I think its great.

[baybay]

no thanku so much!!

[Andrew James Armstrong]

thanks, this is a very nice poem, and thank you for reviewing mine, that really means alot to me!