kissing ur love goodbye

its hard to let the love of your life go. cause you love them and probably always will. i have a friend that told me if my ex has moved on and he is happy with his new love then its time for me to move on too. he is a real good friend of mine and he has i

I have been through the heart break stage.

and i think its time to turn that page.

 

i don't want to cry anymore.

i don't know what you loved me for.

 

you just brought me down.

you hurt me everytime you came around.

 

i cant deal with you cause i dont know how.

but i can say i hate you now.

 

what happened to the sweet, nice kody that took my hand.

i really thought i could make you understand.

 

this time i just cant pretend.

you never loved me in the end.

 

i feel so alone in this world.

and i thought i was your girl.

 

but you lied to me.

when you said it was meant to be.

 

when i called you wanted to be leaft alone.

so i just hung up my hearts phone.

 

i guess what im saying is i wont be hear when you call.

and i wont help you back up when you fall.

 

 

 

because of all the times you lied

 im kiss you baby goodbye.

goodbye.

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Great rhyming and flow among such outpouring of hurt and pain... I love the ending, taking a stand and moving on.

[EILEEN McGUINNESS]

A very sad yet profound piece of writing i like the way you have opened up and worn your heart on your sleave here very endearing and profound use of words which adds to the eloquence of such a divine write, you are right to want to find a person who loves you from within and not the photo that everyone sees, we could all look different in real life as opposed to cyberspace excellent sensible judgement and you deserve to have many friends as a result of this statement.take care

[baybay]

thnx guys iloveu!!!

[melissa]

great flow!

[baybay]

thnx

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heyyyy baybayyyyy!!!
that's GREAT
hehe
glad u r taking a new direction
muahhh!!!!
:)))

[Cody Durham]

this poem talks about one ofthe biggest problems i c with people. u get one person that really cares for the other, but the love isnt returned. then the person ends up getting hurt for doing nothing more then fallowing there heart. its a sad sight to c :(

im glad ur past the sad stage and ready to move on, it shows u have inner strength.

[Joe]

How sad. What a loss. I like this poem, although the spelling was off...maybe you meant for it to be that way, I don't know because I'm an old school writer...LOL. Good job. I like it.