Character Profile:

a mostly true story of what happened this year but had to change a couple things for the rest to make sense. sorry for any confusion!!

Brandi: Medium dark red hair, brown eyes, tan, ear piercings.

Personality:Bubbly, Emo, defensive, loveing, funny, a little secretive.

Relationships: Gabria's best friend since 3rd grade, Kale's girlfriend. (picture below)

 

 

Gabria: long straight hair usually different colors, green eyes, pale, snake bites, nose ring, bellybutton, ears pierced.

Personality: emo, artistic, shy, hopeless romantic, dresses her own way, stands up for whats right, defensive, secretive.

Relationships: Brandi's best friend, Sylis's girlfriend, Hazen's ex-girlfriend. (picture below)

 

 

Kale: short brown hair, brown eyes, tan, muscular, ear pierced

Personality: Funny, country boy, not a genius in school, loving, protective

Relationships: Brandi's boyfriend, Gabria's friend, Sylis's friend.

 

 

 

Sylis: medium hair, naturally blonde but dyes it black, bright blue eyes, pale, muscular.

Personality: born with depression, emo, smart, quiet, hates school, funny, loving, protective, defensive

Relationships: Gabria's boyfriend, Kale's friend, hates hazen.

 

 

 

Hazen: Short brown hair, light green eyes, ear pierced, muscular, tan.

Personality: easily jealous, anger problems, football player, funny, genius, friendly, protective, looking for a fight.

Relationships: Hates Sylis, loves Gabria, Gabria's ex-boyfriend and friend, Brandi's ex-friend.

 

 

 

 

New Hazen: Long shaggy black hair, dark purple eyes, ear pierced, muscular, normal skin.

Personality: Loving , protecting, friendly, smart, mysterious.

Relationships: Adrastea's enemy, Gabria's protecter and friend.

 

 

 

 

Ok so heres the story of before:

Gabria and Sylis have been together since she was in 8th grade(sylis was in 10th). around the end of 9th he started acting wierd: not being nice, saying hurtful things, not calling or saying i love you, just the little things that meant the most, then the big things, then it was like he didn't care at all. all the thoughts ran through her mind: was there someone else, was he going to leave me, does he not love me anymore, and tons more. she began being depressed and cutting cause she blamed herself for what was happening. then came hazen(also in 10th well now 11th), they had been friends for a while and he was fun they didnt really hang out outside of school but he was still a good friend, one day she asked for his number and they talked, about everything. he started to worry and said he was there for her to talk, so she did. she told him everything, the hateful attitude from sylis,how he ignored her alot, how he was treating her, and how she wished it was like before. thats when it started, see there was always an attraction between them but they never acted on it before, he started by saying things like "i bet you looked pretty and he didnt even notice?". and they flirted, soon it turned out to be great, she stopped cutting and talked to him everyday, not even noticing that sylis didnt talk to her much. then she left him, she was so much happier with hazen than sylis, hazen treated her so well and they had alot in common. but she was still in love with sylis..And sylis didnt know what he had till it was gone. he started noticing, everything. he became suicidal and greatly depressed. 3 years went by before he said anything, they were still in love. hazen on the other hand knew what was going to happen, she was going to leave him for sylis, and thats what happened. gabria and hazen remained friends but did't talk until now........

Author's Note

i know its confusing sorry.....

Reviews

[Ross]

confusing, but a great start!!! Not sure about the idea of a single sentence, though

[Moyo]

It is a little confusing, but only because you wrote it a bit too confusing. You wrote it like if you were talking to someone, and that doesn't translate well on writing. But I kinda get it... I think...

[Brandi.]

well i know whats going on. *jimmy smile*

[Aurora Boreyalis]

i know but most of it is true except the 3 years went by. so much drama i had a wierd dream and wrote chapter one about it but its hard to explain the before part so sorry for the confusion

[Blue]

...I agree with daydreamer54

[Daydreamer54]

Ok... this is confusing...