He said forever and I said I promise

Me and the person i wrote this for are not together anymore, just thought i would keep it anyway

If I could say one thing is I love you,

Your voice is like and angel, So soft and calming

It makes me cry when your unhappy. How I wish to make you so,

I know lately its been hard, But I can change it, I swear it,

If I could say one thing is that I love you,

You said forever and I said I promise,

I never thought it would last as long as this,

When they fight you want to steel me away, I know it'll happen someday,

Just two more years until I can leave, I'll make you happy, You'll see,

If I could say one thing is that I love you

You and me, Forever.

 

Author's Note

umm well i never really wright anything and this is like the first poem i let anyone really see so it might be suckish....

Reviews

[Brandi.]

bree, nothing you ever say is suckish it can just be odd ;))))))