Dead

I am so dead inside that
You could call me the living dead.
I never wanted this to happen,
I tried so hard to stop it.
I have found something to live for,
Yet keep getting torn down.
What do I have to do to win this battle?
Why does this make me feel this way?
I will do anything to
Get rid of this feeling,
And these thoughts.
Just tell me what I have to do,
And I will do it,
No questions asked.

Reviews

[Louise Winter]

This poem is amazing. So relatable. Well done :)

[Miles W.]

Very intriguing. It seems like you take the struggles of a hurting person and show how they might respond to the issue. I can understand. The sense of wanting to cast aside all emotion while hurting in order to be rid of pain. Good poem.

[Nyx]

thank you. I actually use my poems to express the emotions that I keep hidden inside of me.