Lost in a dream

Lost in a dream

A Poem by B.J
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To be lost in a dream and see everyone you knew in your life

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I dream a dream so often now,
I see Mum and Dad and everyone I knew
Like looking through a mirror, the sky is blue
The grass is green, is it winter or spring?

Lost in a dream, I see children playing
Singing songs, am I home?
Everyone is there, Oh! how I missed the times
As I walk down the street, I feel it's good to see home 
They'll all come to meet me, following me home

Home is part of my dream, the home is still there
Hidden among the garden of roses
The old Cloths line where I used to swing, I floated above
They all came to meet me, following me home

I dream a dream so often now,
I see Mum and Dad and everyone I knew
Like looking through a mirror, the sky is blue
The grass is green, is it winter or spring?

Oh! my dreams are so vivid
I awake to my surroundings
Mirrored dreams remind me where I am

Arm in arm I walk a lonely road
I am not alone, yet I wonder
Will I ever see those faces again
In winter or spring

Yes! they all came to meet me
And followed me home
I sat among the roses
Floated above the cloths line
Is it winter or spring? when I arrived

I dreamed the impossible dream
Like looking through a mirror, the sky is blue
The grass is green and the roses bloom all year round

© 2015 B.J


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Beautiful, sounds like getting to Heaven and finding all of those who went on before you. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


B.J

8 Years Ago

Thank you, yes, I wrote that at a stage in my life where I was lost in life, and not at all well. I .. read more
we dream and sometimes we connect on a level we cannot explain but the feelings resonate beautifully!

Posted 8 Years Ago


B.J

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind review
Love this, especially the closing stanza.
Very well written and expressed.

Posted 8 Years Ago


B.J

8 Years Ago

Thanks again for your reviews. They are appreciated.
we can always`s go home,back in time if only through the portals of our mind
we see every one as clear as day,hear their laughter and watch the children play
if not for dreams where would we be

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

So true thank you for your words. Not been on line much at all
 wordman

9 Years Ago

I noticed you havent
A very beautiful Dream :) Lovely write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind word
it reads like a very pleasant dream ... i hope it might be like that when i die .. i have dreams of loved ones who have passed over ... but they few among all the dreams i have had ..but oh so welcomed .. i have never thought of all the people i know or known to be guardians to my own passing .. a comforting thought maybe! .. must examine my conscience to be sure i have asked forgiveness from those i was not so nice to .. ;)
E.

Posted 9 Years Ago


B.J

9 Years Ago

I will have to check too. Thank you for your kind words..Makes us wonder what it would be like when .. read more

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Added on February 4, 2015
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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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