Steely determination

As i close my eyes day and night

Relaxation is on my mind

Picture the meadow and the wind

Breathe calm, in and out slowly

Happiness and peace are on my mind

Breathe calm, in and out slowly

With  steely determination

My light reflects a picture

The meadow and the wind

No more darkness, no-more dark dreams

There are times when dark is okay

I don't mind walking in the dark on a summers night

I like my morning to walk most days

In a world that revolves around my being

I like to keep a light on, in my head

I like to push the darkness away

I'm finding new parts of my mind to explore

My world is opening to the light of the world

With  steely determination

My light reflects a picture

The meadow and the wind

No more darkness, no-more dark dreams

I'm not at the bottom of the mountain anymore

I can have a new world

I've decided I can have it

Determination and patience

Faith in myself and God

Reviews

[wordman]

and I can picture that tall grass in the meadow swaying as the winds gently blow
as you take that morning walk with a new day up ahead

[B.J]

I'm glad my work creates a picture

[wordman]

just have to put your self there and look through your eyes

[B.J]

thank you so much

[Lizardo]

The last stanza for me is the best, it could be a poem of it's own too.
I love this one B.J you've created another great poem!
Great work!

[B.J]

Yes actually I thought the same as I did it I really was not all that pleased with it.

[Lizardo]

well, it worked out pretty good

[B.J]

Plus I have not been well getting over one thing and in pain with a knee joint my writing has been taking a bit of a back step...Thank you so much for your comment much appreciated

[Lizardo]

You are welcome and I hope you feel better too

[B.J]

Thank you :).......

[B.J]

started back slowly today

[Lizardo]

Youre welcome!

[B.J]

:)..........................