He is there by your side

Through strain and stress,

Making you tired an invisible,

Your tears continually flow,

God is there and he will wipe them,

He is there by your side,

He will hold your hand and guide you through,

At a time when friends just are not around,

He knows you've seen troubles,

Shrouding you when you sleep,

Guiding you through troubles,

And when you need to rest,

He will give you peace,

He knows you've wandered,

Wandered aimlessly,

But when night falls,

He is always there,

Comforting you,

He takes your hand,

Guiding you to your haven,

Protecting you from the pain,

Your world is your oyster,

Your ocean has claimed you,

You've opened your oyster,

All your dreams are shinning,

Your oyster gleams, your world gleams,

Call out if your in need,

I'm not far,

I tell you "Your Alive",

He is there by your side,

He will hold your hand and guide you through,

At a time when friends just are not around,

I am there, to guide you,

Reviews

[A Ghost of Myself]

I couldn't agree with this more, not only is it a true statement, but it reminds my of the poem 'Footprints.' I for one have him to thank for my life, and not a day goes by where I don't thank him and see the beauty and wonder. Now onto the poem, there's a few spots where you lost your flow, the meaning and message are great no problems there, its pace.

He is always there,
Comforting you,

He will hold your hand and guide you through,
At a time when friends just are not around,

When I came to these passages it halted my read, the rhythm was broken in the transition. This could be me, but you may want to read it out loud and at a steady pace.

Overall an enjoyable read.

[B.J]

Thank you I did do some correction to what I thought what might be greater flow, I appreicate any help what so ever. Truly appreciated

[wordman]

a beautiful write it shows you are venerable a and we all are ,and we count on god to walk beside us
and carry us through the storms of life

[B.J]

Thank you so much my friend I had a good weekend and blew some distance between me and this world came back free and easy

[wordman]

sometimes a drive in the country works miracles

[B.J]

certainly does me even though I live in the country
Do you get any of the sports channels? If you do and it comes through direct from Australia You will see my state and town where I live..They call it "Tour down under" Lance Armstrong used to come out for it before he got banned

[wordman]

we get them all,i will watch for it

[B.J]

Look for the mention of Barossa Valley Angaston is my town.....Never know little old South Australia may get a mention around the world.....I know I will be on my computer nearly all day tomorrow cause you wont get out of the Valley for Road blocks.

[wordman]

well probally me too taking my truck to the garage in the morning for 2 or 3 days
no truck can`t work lol

[wordman]

just looked on google search,beautiful country

[B.J]

it is just been fiddling with a poem waiting for time for appointment will load it on and come back to it

[Lizardo]

Ah beautiful poem about God
He is everywhere not letting us fall
he's the only one who can understand our problems...
He's a really really really nice guy
I love the poem, To your poem I say Amen and beautiful